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©2009-2010 ~Metalsabe1
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I listened to a lot of Japandroids whilst inking this. Hope you dig it.


She had wet hair, say what you will, I don't care I couldn't resist it!

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:iconmaddoxfanx:
Like I said on AIM, the guy looks all fucked up. Head needs to be wider (though not the face, the face is fine in terms of width) and it needs to be repositioned so that the neck is on the center of it as opposed to the very end. His head shape is too narrow and as a result it looks like his scalp is protruding from his head. The nose is huge and the mouth is disproportionately small. Also his pants has too many random folds.

Girl on the other hand is fine.

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:iconapophis42:
Uhhh...you are aware that your head isn't USUALLY bigger than your body, right? I mean, I think the width of the head is fine. I do agree, with everything else. Except the pants folds thing. It's not too many, it's that they look weird.
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Thanks for the critique bro.

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:iconapophis42:
Is Ada wearing socks or boots? I just can't tell.
:iconmetalsabe1:
She's wearing those white boots she's always wearing'n stuff.

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:iconmonkichiro:
Hey! It's been a while. Nice to see you updating again.

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:iconmetalsabe1:
Yeah it has, thanks for the comment!

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:iconmonkichiro:
no problem. how is avery isle coming along?

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:iconmetalsabe1:
I've got some pages drawn out, just finished inking one. But good god if it isn't hot as hell right now. Kind of bumming me out.

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:iconmonkichiro:
I'm burning in my house too. I just learned today that my windows have been closed this whole week. now that they're open I feel so much better.

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